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PostSubject: Shoukyaku, The unrevealable Zanpakuto   Shoukyaku, The unrevealable Zanpakuto EmptyTue Oct 06, 2009 3:51 am

Name: Shoukyaku ((Nicknamed: Kyaku))

Manifestation:
Spoiler:

Release Phrase: "Hanto, Kyaku" or "Hanto, Shoukyaku"

Level: Shikai

Family: Wind

Sealed Zanpacktou:
Spoiler:

[shikai]Released Zanpacktou:
Kyaku: Shoukyaku is not a stealthy weapon by any stretch of the imagination. So, Mibae hides its true form through the use of a punishing nickname. Angered by the nickname, Shoukyaku refuses to fully wake up. Instead of taking its actual form, Shoukyaku becomes a pair of large daggers, the blades looking much like smaller versions of the blades on her true shikai form.

Shoukyaku:
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The true form of Shoukyaku. When this is released, her blade will completely disappear. Suddenly, from her waist, two massive blades will extend on thin metal poles that have several different joints. These blades are about half her height each, and about two feet wide. The blades are controlled through wind reiatsu.

Shikai Ability:
Kyaku: This form will cover her body in a thin layer of wind reiatsu. This layer will protect her from any kidou level 20 and below, as well as masking any noise she makes by making contact with the ground or her surroundings. She can also spike her reiatsu to use the wind to increase her strength and speed in short bursts. If she does this it only lasts for two posts, and she is left without a wind layer until her regenerates in four posts.

Shoukyaku: In the true form, the wind reiatsu is actually used to control her massive blade weapons. However, she can also use the wind reaitsu that she creates to attack her opponent, striking them with condensed wind reaitsu like blunt objects. These attacks are only visible through the slight ripple in the air that they form as they speed toward her opponent.


Name: Kegawa - Pelt
Effect: These technique thickens the layer of wind reiatsu around her, protecting her from any kidou-based attack equivalent to kidou number 40 and below. The true-form rendition of this involves forming a small barrier around her, though essentially providing the same effect.
Duration and/or Cooldown: 5 posts

Name: Tsume - Claw
Effect: This technique can only be used in the half-released form. She will gather her entire shell of wind into her legs, releasing it in a short burst of speed. Using this speed, she will double her shunpo speed, moving past her opponent and attempting to slash their throats open.
CD: 7 posts

Name: Shikon - Fang
Effect: This technique uses wind reaitsu to form a new weapon, which she can use to fight along with any other weapon the current level of release has provided her with.
Duration/CD: 3 posts/ 4 posts

Name: Manako - Eye
Effect: This technique releases a burst of wind reiatsu which will stay static in a 5 meter radius around Mibae for the duration of the technique. Anyone who comes within 5 meters of her will disturb the wind, instantly alerting her of their position.
Duration: 3 posts/ 5 posts.

Rules in making Techs:
0-100 points: 3 techs
101-200: 4 techs
201-300: 5 techs
301-400: 6 techs.... and so on...
NOTE: Put if the tech is used in shikai or bankai for the sake of order


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PostSubject: Re: Shoukyaku, The unrevealable Zanpakuto   Shoukyaku, The unrevealable Zanpakuto EmptyTue Oct 06, 2009 4:35 am

Somthing that would make this more cohesive is if you put your pictures in spoilers, it makes it easier to read and I saw you do it in your character application.

In your true shikai can you use the wind as a boost similar to the partial release?

Your ability Pelt cannot block any kido based attack, that is very OP and not fair to some one who specializes in kido. Please change it to something weaker and include a cooldown and duration.

Explain Fang better, in your parital release you already have two daggers. As you do not have three arms there is no effective way you could wield it.
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PostSubject: Re: Shoukyaku, The unrevealable Zanpakuto   Shoukyaku, The unrevealable Zanpakuto EmptyTue Oct 06, 2009 4:50 am

Good boy, you pass. Thanks for not being a dipshit and just saying approved. ^-^

Edited to what it was supposed to be.
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PostSubject: Re: Shoukyaku, The unrevealable Zanpakuto   Shoukyaku, The unrevealable Zanpakuto EmptyTue Oct 06, 2009 7:09 am

Ok, I belive that this template can be refered to as APPROVED
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PostSubject: Re: Shoukyaku, The unrevealable Zanpakuto   Shoukyaku, The unrevealable Zanpakuto EmptyWed Oct 07, 2009 5:36 am

Captain update:
~Hissori ken abunai Shoukyaku~

Bankai zanpacktou: In bankai mode the two massive blades will disappear. Suddenly, She will sprout fur all over her body and her clothes will tear off, leaving her completely naked except for the thick fur that covers her body. She grows ears, her pelt taking the pattern of a leopard.

Bankai Ability: The first ability of her bankai is that she has retractable, six inch long, tanto blades for claws on all four paws. But this is just a minor ability. The main ability of the zanpakuto is that the property of the air changes, and is no longer able to carry sound waves. Because of this, no sound within 80 meters exists, the opponent is forced to fight in a world without sound.


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PostSubject: Re: Shoukyaku, The unrevealable Zanpakuto   Shoukyaku, The unrevealable Zanpakuto EmptyWed Oct 07, 2009 5:37 am

Approved.
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