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Shieru Phantomhive

Shieru Phantomhive


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PostSubject: Shieru Phantomhive ARRANCAR   Shieru Phantomhive ARRANCAR EmptyThu Nov 05, 2009 1:54 am

Name:Shieru Phatomhive

Rank: Regular for now!

Age: 300

Visual Age: 18

Gender: Male

Picture:Umm.

Appearance:Shieru Has Light Purple Eyes and Beige Hair.He isnt very tall and he is PRetty skinny but he has Sharp Eyes and he sees alot of things that others might not see.
His Skin is really pale and it brings out his Purple eyes.He also has a small nose and a big Mouth.
Shierus hair is not very long but they cover most of his head and eyes the hair on his neck is a little black.He isnt very muscular and the skin under his eyes is dark,what means he does not sleep much.
Shieru Looks really friendly but not only that he is friendly unlike to all the other Arrancar.But he only is frendly to other of his kind.


Clothing: When In Casual Clothing He Wears a White Baggy T Shirt and White Long Pants.
He also has white sandals with Black Socks.He Likes to wear a Hood on his head.
Mask fragment location:The fragment covers most of the right ear but some of it crawls down the neck.

Hollow Hole location: Stomach (Like Grimjows)

Personality:Shieru has a Huge grudge against the Sunlight because he always wears a hood when it is a sunny day because he thinks that the sun will ruin his eyes.He also Likes to be with others he hates being alone.Sometimes He just starts crying without any reason.
HE is really Friendly with other arrancars,he isnt afraid of the espada but st´ill tends to stay away from them because they are made of pure Death like Shieru himself.He also cant sleep because he does not like silence so he is always happy when some sounds surround him.
Traits:
Likes:When Lots of People are together,He likes to Eat and Drink.
Dislikes:Sun,Being Alone,Silence,Hunger

History:
Life.
Shieru Lived a Humble life He had Nothing wrong with his life he was Happy in every way.
He had Lots of Friends and he had Good Grades at School,when it was sumer he spent almost everyday at the beach with his friends.
He had a really good life,untill that one day.He wet to the beach all by himself he had brought everything with him,he placed all the stuff near the ocean and went swimming.At first he did not notice that there wasnt almost in the beach when he suddenly was pulled underwater.He tried to swim up but some kind of Whirlwind held him down.
Hours later he woke up at the beach,atleast he tought that he woke up,several seconds later he stood up and looked around when he noticed his dead body laying at the wet sandwith several spikes trough it.

Living As Soul:
It took Shieru Lots of time To Understand that he was a Soul,after few days he was attacked buy some huge monster,but he was able to flee from the rampaging Monster.After that Attack He could evade some of the smaller monsters but finally he was conforted by some Huge monster who just forced Shieru on the floor with some strong force and he devoured him with ease.

Living as Hollow
As a Hollow Shieru Didnt Devour many souls and thats why hes Evolving wasnt really fast
It took him really much time to get into a Higher Hollow Form at some time he realised that there is nothing he can do about his life anymore and started to devour more and more hollows but for something he only went hunting at night it didnt take long for him to advance to Menos after few years he started devouring other hollows that werent so strong to struglle.
When 200 Years was past his death he Advanced To a Adjuchas Form.But He Overestimated his powers and was almost killed in a battle with a Vasto Lorde.
When Shieru woke up he was already in a Human for with a ask Fragment on the right side of his face
he just stood up and walked for years until he finally arrived at Las Noches.In there he was granted with a Katana And Had His Power sealed inside it.100 Have passed since that day and now Shieru Has gaine lot more power but he still is a Normal arrancar because he doesent want to enter the Espada Ranks Because He is Afraid That he is going to Overestimate himself again!

Innate Ability:
There is a Small hole in Shierus back,when someone is behind him he can send out a small sharp bone fracture what does not create any damage but still gives a big push to the opponent.

RP sample:
Shieru Slowly walks on the dark streets with his hood on and looking on the ground,with his toughts of how to capture curios Souls.He walks to a park and stands to the center and points his hand to the skies and sends out a small Cero beam.
With some minutes passed any souls start to gather near Shieru he smirks and Claps his hands God Damn this works everytimeWith the last claps he sucks all the souls inside him giving him a Really Good Feeling.Ahhh Tasty Meal Time to Head home Now!

Ps:Im Sorry If there are Some mistakes or some letters missing my KB isnt working Correctly


Last edited by Shieru Phantomhive on Sun Nov 08, 2009 12:25 am; edited 4 times in total
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Shieru Phantomhive

Shieru Phantomhive


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PostSubject: Re: Shieru Phantomhive ARRANCAR   Shieru Phantomhive ARRANCAR EmptyThu Nov 05, 2009 7:46 pm

I kinda edited it.
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PostSubject: Re: Shieru Phantomhive ARRANCAR   Shieru Phantomhive ARRANCAR EmptyFri Nov 06, 2009 2:58 am

Um... right... before I even touch this, my advice is to put more into personality and scratch off the innate ability. Temperature with Reiatsu stealth and damage nullification doesn't make sense whatsoever. Also more details for traits and clothing.
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PostSubject: Re: Shieru Phantomhive ARRANCAR   Shieru Phantomhive ARRANCAR EmptyFri Nov 06, 2009 9:31 pm

Sure, there is some effort there and it's below standards, but it'll do. APPROVED.
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PostSubject: Re: Shieru Phantomhive ARRANCAR   Shieru Phantomhive ARRANCAR EmptySun Nov 08, 2009 12:26 am

Oh,first i didnt notice i got approved but i added my Innate
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PostSubject: Re: Shieru Phantomhive ARRANCAR   Shieru Phantomhive ARRANCAR EmptySun Nov 08, 2009 12:49 am

Right... so how does a small sharp bone fracture (structure?) actually push someone away if it would perhaps hurt the person?
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PostSubject: Re: Shieru Phantomhive ARRANCAR   Shieru Phantomhive ARRANCAR EmptySun Nov 08, 2009 12:53 am

Dam....
If you say it seems so stupid idea.......
Leme Think it Over again
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