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PostSubject: Awake Izod Luka   Fri Nov 06, 2009 3:06 pm

Name: Izod Luka

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Rank: Elite

Age: 20,000

Visual Age: Late 20's

Gender: Male

Personality: Izod has a brutal, impulsive, excessively violent personality. he is unaffected by any form of morals or ethics he has a massive hatred of all things living he views them as scum waste and filth which should be whipped out and never allowed to thrive. Izod his also very cunning often taking the weakness of others and flipping it on them but more so Izod sees him self a god of sorts but not speaking so brashly about it.

Appearance: Izod is not one whose looks have not been known, but he stands at 6'6 with a very lean build he has tan skin with red hair that drapes down about shoulder length and with some of it styled like horns. click

Clothing: Izod wears a some what tight black leather suit, this suit is a power converter, the clothing is armoured is covered with chains around the chest buckles across the neck, arms, and legs. Also the jacket comes down to about the ankle and has skulls with metal spikes at the end of them, also Izod has hidden with in it a chain sword which extends and contracts with a red steel cable which is controlled by his wrist. click

Mask fragment location: His fragment takes the form of a thin crown that dips down the nose and around the mouth and jaw.

Hollow Hole location: Is dead centrer of is abs is about the size of a medicine ball.

Personality: Izod has a brutal, impulsive, excessively violent personality. he is unaffected by any form of morals or ethics he has a massive hatred of all things living he views them as scum waste and filth which should be whipped out and never allowed to thrive. Izod his also very cunning often taking the weakness of others and flipping it on them but more so Izod sees him self a god of sorts but not speaking so brashly about it also due to the years that Izod has been alive it shows in how he treats every one.

Traits: Izod can play on others fears and weaknesses. also likes to carry bombs and explosives which he makes his self.

Innate Ability:

Sheer cold: Due to his Reiryoku being three times the normal level, Izods reiatsu can drop the temperature seven feet around him to about negative two degrees while also chilling the air if he stays in one place long enough throwing off those who fight him due to the shock to their system. Izod can not actively control this it is some what of its own being the only real control is in his touch which can drop the atomic temperature of matter organic or inorganic to 5 degrees kelvin which would takes twelve posts to completely freeze any part of an person with constant contact once broken the freezing stops and returns to normal instantly.

History/Background:

Babylon-Egypt:
Izod was born from a rotten body of a sickly wife of a demented king, at the still young age of five Izod was shown how to rule as king and how to be a warlord. The training would lead to a being so vile and full of spite that he would murder his father mother and sister for the joy of knowing they would no longer be alive to bother him, but with in a week of doing this Izod's power as a superhuman rushed forth and it was like a signal flair summoning hollow attacks almost every day. Izod took up his army which was effected by him and could see these monsters and fought bravely killing many hollows but as the numbers grew Izods army shrank it was becoming almost impossible to maintain, after six years of fighting the people that Izod ruled rebelled and cast him out of the city state forcing him to live as a nomad fighting hollows and bandits to live for seven more years he wondered until he made his way into Egypt.

In Egypt Izod meet others like him and they worshipped gods that seemingly were hollows but they were humanoid, here was a land Izod could live and if he did it right rule over slowly everything seemingly died down the hollow attacks seemingly ended with out a word other wise. It was hear that Izod began to learn about the stars and other things that seemingly defied the human logic, but over all other things his lust for power and everlasting life seemed to show through and it worried the Pharaoh but as much as it seemed that Izod was out to over take the land he showed that he was for the way things were no longer a king but close to it in many ways. After five tribal wars and fighting to keep control of the lower kingdoms along with keeping them from being wipe out by sand storms Izod was placed in charged of keeping the mystic order of things in the lower kingdom, slowly Izods gift made him into a a living god and as such the Pharaoh mistakenly orders that his soul be freed from its earthly prison so with in seven days Izod was forced into the chamber called the temple of true gods. It was there that Izod was killed and it was there that his hatred of humans began and in this plus state he noticed a chain that seemingly was still attached to his corps and with some effort and bitterness Izod broke his own chain vowing that they would pay for his death.

Gillian-Adjuchas-Vasto:
Not much is known about his transformation into a demi hollow and then to
Gillian, a further mystery is his time as Adjuchas there are how ever
bits and pieces about what took place but even that is limited. In this state he killed a unknown number of people and took in souls close to one million among the first killed was a new Captain on her own for the first time. She tried to stop him from killing the ones who damned him as she told him her reason for being there he showing no reaction to her statement, Izod attacked her even as a demi hollow he was a lethal force and with out Izod knowing her soul and those of his murderers a transformation took over and in a week his body became that of a hollow and with it a need for more souls. every thing that came into contact with him became targets, over four million souls with in the rise and fall of Greece,Rome and as Gillian a thousand voices turned into one voice which summoned the rise of Izod as a Adjuchas. With the coming of what would be called the middle ages Izod took on more of a upfront approach to killing no longer setting up traps he killed everything living and if any shinigami came to kill him or purify his soul but he slew them all, on twelve different attacks Izod almost lost his life fighting high level captains and other Adjuchas but seemingly over coming the near death fights that seemed to hunt him after he reached the level of Vasto Izod fought four more times before he found a new life. Each of the last fights seemingly pushed him to his limits and with these last souls Izod reached a new realm of power something that not ever Izod himself could see, the last captain he fought left him bloodied and half alive but in one last jolt of rage Izod struck and with it ended the life of his attacker but at the cost of his mask.

The Espada comes.
With the death of the most lethal captain he had fought to date, Izod stood with a half broken mask and with it pules of power seemingly jerked and warped his very body seemingly have no other ideas Izod gripped the partly intact mask and ripped it free of the is tan face. What happened next was a massive shake then closely followed by a torrent of Reiatsu so great that it crushed the varying Adjuchas and Monos up to seven miles away, Izod had almost thousands of years to become stronger and the more souls he took in most of which were high level beings while in this new state all of that power rushed forth but with a Reiryoku level close to twice an espada Izods body slowly started to break down due to the massive level. So as if part of a story Izod slept hidden from the world around him and away from him this was so that he could some how live longer in a suspended state, with the age of Christ nearing an end and the years of technology rising Izod awoke seeking a way to keep his power form killing him, this answer seemingly with in reach Izod set out to join those who call them self the espada.


Rp Sample: Taking about four steps to the left of the captains sword arm, keeping a very close eye on the shikai that wounded Izod moments ago. blood seemed to flow from the left side of his chest the would was deep and seemingly unable to stop pouring out blood which trailed along the body of Izod and the floor below him, The captain seemed to have only minor wounds which Izod was shocked at he being a Vasto should have easyly wounded and killed this man but he was much stronger then the others more so Izod took from him some one very dear. The blade Izod used was that of the fallen vice captain of the man that stood seemingly god like in front of Izod the deep cuts into the very blade was a statement, Each man traded massive strikes shaking the air with roaring clashes that sound like thunder Izod slipped the blade under the captains while he was in his down swing. Bright red blood swam onto the blade of Izod which then the captain backed away his and holding the wound which was six inches below the right side of his chest, even though this was fatal Izod was nearing the same state so as true swords men the stepped apart about twelve feet and then charged. They each meet in a stalemate the captain used a downward strike once more and Izod used a cross guard, the force of the captains attack left it embedded in the blade of Izods in this very moment Izod spoke to the captain as if this was his last fight. "Almost as if life no longer has a meaning, we stand here fighting, you for vengeance and me for it is my way of life, killers our we that stare at death so willingly knowing that it will come to clam us with out fail." as he spoke in a voice which has lasted thousands of years, Izods blade completely broke form the strain, the captains blade slips through Izods shoulder almost cutting him in half while Izods broken blade slips through the throat of the captain both seemingly killing other but it was Izod who survived but barely Izod took his leave but with out a broken mask and one foot in deaths door.


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PostSubject: Re: Awake Izod Luka   Fri Nov 06, 2009 10:18 pm

Okay, just a few things before I even approve you.

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Clothing: Izod wears a full suit of armour akin to knights in the middle age, this is one of the main reasons why many do knot know what Izod looks like let alone what he wears outside of amour. This armour is very complex but the main use of this armour is to act as a power converter for the over whelming power Izod has it takes the surges of power and feeds it through out the amour giving it a side effect that is a plus rather a negative. Izods amour is impact reactive meaning that physical attacks will do nothing but make it stronger due to it absorbing the vibrations from impacts with its own vibrations and dispersing it through out the amour, but it does have a full weakness which is energy attacks although Izods amour can take these impacts its really only going to last six posts before it starts to break apart and two if the energy attacks are at a high level or the user is of a high level.

Under the amour Izod wears a some what tight black leather suit, this suit is akin to the amour but only as a converter and nothing else, the clothing under the amour is covered with chains around the chest buckles across the neck, arms, and legs. Also the jacket comes down to about the ankle and has skulls with metal spikes at the end of them, also Izod has hidden with in it a chain sword which extends and contracts with a red steel cable which is controlled by his mind.

Biggest issue is with your clothing. It's powerplaying. There will be no armors that absorb attacks like that, and given how your armor must first be hit, you can just endure a million hits in a single post and you won't even get a hint of damage. Especially from physical attacks where you can LORD over the battlefield and completely void out several abilities of a lot of members. "Oh, you can't whack me around and I gain an unfair extra advantage not related to my abilities." I say NON. No armors that does that, unless a scientist makes it, then sure, but UNDER my supervision. Also no chain swords that is controlled by the mind unless it is your Res. This aspect of the sheet is DENIED.

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Power lending: Izod has a massive level of Reiryoku so much that he can level five city blocks with just his reiatsu alone. This vast Reiryoku allows Izod to lend it out or force it into other but like a drug fix it has its side effects, the first is that it has a over powering and corruptive nature it can if too much is taken kill those infected but it will slowly corrupt anyone no matter their personality. It slowly will make those infected addicted and want more but this can be fought off but only for a short moment by those higher in rank then Izod. Second a deal must be made in blood which allows Izod to give his power to others but if this is done Izod can not fight powerful opponents due to a massive drop in power those that make this deal have a symbol on their forehead showing this. Being that Izod is very vile and ruthless he can ant any moment take back the power given leaving those effected weak and sickly but this power lending is not restricted to other beings Izod can lend power to his weapons and boost the effectiveness of cero's and bala's this can be applied to others weapons also.

Sheer cold: Due to his Reiryoku being three times the normal level, Izods reiatsu can drop the temperature seven feet around him to about negative two degrees while also chilling the air if he stays in one place long enough throwing off those who fight him due to the shock to their system. Izod can not actively control this it is some what of its own being the only real control is in his touch which can drop the atomic temperature of matter organic or inorganic to negative four degrees kelvin which would takes three posts to completely freeze any part of an person with constant contact.

No no no. You can't have two innate abilities much less godmodding ones. If anything, these are seen as an attempt to 'gain' abilities in a cheap way. Either ways, remove these two and put an entirely new innate ability. For now, your abilities are DENIED.

Also, I've noticed in your history, that you absorbed one million Hollow souls. That is a definite no-no. Not to mention the strength of three Captains/Espada would technically make you higher than a C.C! For now, that aspect of your history is DENIED. No THREE CAPTAIN level power. It's just godmodding. For now, your entire sheet is DENIED until you make those further adjustments and address my concerns.
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PostSubject: Re: Awake Izod Luka   Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:23 am

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