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 Hakudoshi Rentai's Zanpakutou: Kaneyoru

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Hakudoshi Rentai
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PostSubject: Hakudoshi Rentai's Zanpakutou: Kaneyoru   Hakudoshi Rentai's Zanpakutou: Kaneyoru EmptyWed Feb 10, 2010 1:46 pm

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-General Info-

-Zanpakuto Name: Kaneyoru (Adamant Knight)

-Family: Earth

-Type: Ranged/Projectiles

-Sealed Description: The Zanpakuto is nothing special, it has nothing special about it at all. It is a normal Katana. Though it can be described in depth.
The Hilt is about 6 inches long, and 3 inches wide, wrapped in green colored silk. The silk is soft and elegant, reflecting something a king would have. It feels nice in Hakudoshi's hand, as it should. The silk is wrapped tightly and making thin diamond markings on the hilt.
The Gaurd is not special either, it is just an outward-pointing star around the hilt. While it is sealed, it is made of pure gold, and is dull at the ends of the points of the star. On the star, written out in small letters is "Hakudoshi Rentai - The Adamant Knight". The star has a thin trim of green around the edges of it, making it look elegant

-Camouflage: None

-Manifestation-
-Appearance: Tall, silver-ish skin. Green hair with a green robe that is hooded. Very mysterious, very plain. His lips are a light pink, and his teeth are pure white. He wears no shoes, as his feet are tough enough to withstand the 'pain'.

-Personality: Very quiet, and when he speaks, its blunt. In times of dire need he'll speak up and offer advice. Although he can be called a "jerk" he'll stand by his master no matter what.

-Inner World:kudoshi's inner world is a wide, dark cave. It is rather humid and damp in every corner of the cave inside. When things are quiet, you can hear the water drip from the stalagmites. The walls and ground of the cave glimmer a silver-green color, because this isnt just an ordinary cave, it's a cave that produces Adamant. If you venture far enough in this world, you leave the darkness and find passageways all around which lead to different chambers. Each chamber leads to a dead end with adamant growing EVERYWHERE. Through each corridor adamant will be growing. Some formations small, while others are large.
Each corridor is different, they each vary in their own style of uniqueness. While one corridor may be cold, another may feel warm. It's never the same, its never like the other. For instance, if he wishes to speak to his Zanpakuto, and travels into his Inner World through Meditation, he may go through a corridor and feel immense gravity, while five feet back, everything felt normal.
Everything in his Inner World is different and random. It reflects the real world greatly, though is differs in it so much, its hard to believe. As said, his Inner World is calm and quiet, though some may say it isnt so quiet, for it's so quiet, it ends up amplifying any sound picked up in the cave. Footsteps sound much louder than usual, and your breathing sounds like panting because of the constant echo of the dark, damp place.
Though his Inner World is the place his Zanpakuto lives, many other beings dwell there. It's a cave for sanity's sake, of course there wont be ONLY a spirit in there! It is also inhabited by snakes, which are completely harmless and welcome Hakudoshi, they are there as well. And from time to time, you hear a screech from a bat, and you see them sleeping on the ceiling and any place dark. His Zanpakuto isnt the only being who lives there

-Connection: The element being Earth, more specific: Adamant, it shows that Hakudoshi is strong willed, and will not break no matter how much pressure you put on him! He's as tough as Adamant!

-Shikai-

-Release Phrase: Strike!

-Shikai Appearance:Same as Sealed state

-Shikai Ability: Is able to shoot adamant shards directly from his sword.


-Techniques:Barrage: When this word is said, and the blade moves in a horizontal, slicing motion, and as the blade slices, Adamant shards fly from the sword itself. And thousands of tiny shards of adamant come out, ranging in size from about 1 inch long and 1 inch wide and deep to around 3 inches long and 2 inches deep and wide. In Shikai, these are very easy to block. That is if you have the stamina to block thousands of tiny adamant shards. They dont do very much damage however. They usually dont hit in shikai. But if they do, if they dont get lodged in your body, they make minor cuts to to the area it hits, causing you to bleed a little bit. It may not do much damage, but this attack is very painful to withstand if you are hit directly. Cooldown: 2 posts

-Bankai-
[[Reserved for Captain class shinigami, unless it is trained for.]]

-Zanpakuto's full name: Kaneyoru

-Bankai Appearance: As my blade transforms, it will no longer be made of steel, it'll be made of pure adamant. The blade will be composed of pressurized adamant crystals merged together to create a Adamant Blade. In Bankai, more changes will occur. The Guard will no longer be gold and yellow, It, too will change form and instead of gold it'll be made of Adamant Crystals going in a outward circle around the hilt. The hilt will of made a huge change, as well. When in Bankai, the hilt will be made of wood yes, but there will be wrapping around it; a silver colored wrapping in the design of - you guessed it - crystals. But in addition to that, when Hakudoshi grabs the blade, adamant will come out of the blade and wrap around his hands, giving his hands protection and ensuring that the blade wont, for some reason, come out of his hands

-Bankai Ability: Same as Shikai, though it covers Hakudoshi and he's able t generate it in more of a 'mass'.

-Techniques:
(Not a tech, though belongs here)Protection: When Hakudoshi grabs a hold of the blade, Adamant will come over his hands (as said in the description) and his body will gain a light layer of adamant over his skin, making it harder to hit him. But thats not all, adamant covers his feet, making his boots made out of adamant.

Wave: When signalled by the word "wave", Hakudoshi can slash his sword in any motion and out of the blade a wave of adamant will appear. This ability is rather useful when guarding a ranged attack or clearing an area of many minor enemies. It can also be used as an attack for close range with a strong enemy. For example, he can use wave when fighting somebody of significant strength and it will push them in the direction the wave is going. He can use it in a closed area and it will pin his enemy to the wall while Hakudoshi either has time to run or begin attacking. Cooldown: 3 posts

Barrage: Yes, he has this ability in Shikai, but when its used in Bankai, it is much more devastating and powerful. The makeup is all the same as Shikai, but when in Bankai, they will come larger, and faster, and with more numbers. Instead of being from about 1 inch long and 1 inch wide and deep to around 3 inches long and 2 inches deep and wide, they will be 3 inches long and 2 inches wide and deep, and they will come with more force and speed. Making them harder to block and when or if they hit, they do massive damage, more than its Shikai move could ever hope of accomplishing. Instead of the change of them being "lodged" in your body, they have the high chance of going THROUGH your body, which could be a very bad thing for his opponent. As i said, they will come in more numbers, so instead of only thousands, there are around 7,000 of them, and they come quick, and as long as you are able to block them (which will be more difficult) you will remain safe, though blocking them in this state will require a lot more energy and work. Cooldown: 2 posts


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Dr. Reaper Jones

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PostSubject: Re: Hakudoshi Rentai's Zanpakutou: Kaneyoru   Hakudoshi Rentai's Zanpakutou: Kaneyoru EmptyWed Feb 10, 2010 11:29 pm

Ok first things first, you need to make up you mind you can not have a earth type that tears through space and time thats not a earth element thats void you can have terrakinesis or you can have the shards come from your blade, second more detail in your Zans Manifestation, over all you need to tone down everything in the Zan just a tad because right now its a bit over powered 70,000 is beyond reason even for bankai make the numbers of all tecs with in reason like in the seventies or hundred which to be fair to others.
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Hakudoshi Rentai
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PostSubject: Re: Hakudoshi Rentai's Zanpakutou: Kaneyoru   Hakudoshi Rentai's Zanpakutou: Kaneyoru EmptyThu Feb 11, 2010 8:42 am

*sigh* done.
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Yoshirou Akiyama
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PostSubject: Re: Hakudoshi Rentai's Zanpakutou: Kaneyoru   Hakudoshi Rentai's Zanpakutou: Kaneyoru EmptyFri Feb 12, 2010 5:35 am

Reaper, Honestly, Earth element was fine. He'd just have to rephrase. Because of the change to earth element, The other techs are now rather bad.

Hakudoshi, What i would do is rephrase the barrage tech to say that it leaves a crescent arc of energy behind your horizontal motion with materializes into a barrage of Adamant shards. That, I would approve. As long as the element was earth.
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Hakudoshi Rentai
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PostSubject: Re: Hakudoshi Rentai's Zanpakutou: Kaneyoru   Hakudoshi Rentai's Zanpakutou: Kaneyoru EmptyFri Feb 12, 2010 5:39 am

edited back to earth, and changed the Tech a little.
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Yoshirou Akiyama
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PostSubject: Re: Hakudoshi Rentai's Zanpakutou: Kaneyoru   Hakudoshi Rentai's Zanpakutou: Kaneyoru EmptyFri Feb 12, 2010 6:02 am

Approved. Go have fun lacerating people to death.
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