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Steve




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Join date : 2010-02-06

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PostSubject: Steves char wip   Steves char wip EmptyTue Feb 23, 2010 10:52 am

-Vaizard-


General Information:

-Full Name: Maneki Neko

-Nicknames/Aliases/Titles:

-Noteable Family:

-Loyalties:To the vizards and shinigamis under certain circumstances.

-Actual Age200

Appearance:

-Appearance: Steves char wip 3ebc378

Maneki has raven black hair and red piercing eyes. His clothing are standard shingami wear and he wears no shoes.

-Preferred Wardrobe: Maneki prefers to where the standard shinigami garment even though he is no longer one.

-Height: 5,7 feet

-Weight: 125 lb

-Physical Age:16

Race Specific Information:

-Former Squad:4th

-Gigai Description:Manekis gigai looks exactly like him excepted he had a huge Afro put on his so he could get a couple of chuckles.

Character/Player Bio:

-Personality:Maneki is a very nice kid but a lot of people think he is a little peculiar. HE talks to all the cats in the village before a mission.No one knows why he does it but people think he can actually communicate with the cats.Maneki is also a born tactician.He is very good at thinking 5 and even 10 steps ahead of his opponent.Even though he is a little strange he is a compassionate person.When he talks to the village cats he brings each of them a fish.

He is also very protective when it comes to his friends.If he has an important mission to do but his friend life are in danger he would give up the mission to save them.Maneki also talks to himself just out of the blue some times.Why?Well no one knows why he is talking to himself except.The reason is because he likes to say his plans out loud so he can hear how they sound out in the open and not just in his head.Many people find that weird about maneki but that is just who he is.

-Rank:vizard

-History: Maneki was born in the ruknogai. like most spirits he wanted to become a shinigami one day. After 100 years or so maneki was finally given a chance to take the shinigami entrance exam. The exams was a surprise he was being tested on his physical skill and rejitsu level. The exam was then continued with a 100 question written exam. After several hours the exam was over and the next day they were going to put up the results for the exam. Maneki and the other could be students were sent home for the day. After arriving home maneki filled his parents in with all the details of the exam.









-Roleplay Samples: Maneki after shunpoing for a while he was at the hostel. Maneki want up to his room and decided to take a quick nap. After he woke up he went back down and started to decorate for the party that was going to start. Maneki went over to the hostel supply closet and took out all the things necessary for a party. The things he had were tacks, blank banners ,a nail fun, paint,balloons,and streamers. Maneki collected all the stuff into one area and began to work. First he tested out the nail gun. It was pretty fast and it was pretty accurate. Maneki after finishing up with the nail gun began to actually decorate. He got ta blank banner and the paint and started to write on it. After a few minutes of thinking he thought of what to write on it. He wrote down congratulation graduates. After writing it in big blue letters. Maneki then hung it up over the hostel door. He then realized he only had two tacks. It looked weird only hanging on by two tacks so maneki got the nail gun out. He looked at the banner and saw that he had to fire two nails at the bottom corners of it. He quickly fired off two and waited to see what would happen. Then suddenly he heard a ding sound. He saw the bullets start to fly back at him. He tried to dodge so it missed his hand but they hit both his legs. After a brief moment He put the gun down w of swearing he knew what he had to do. He put the gun down and went out the hostel door. He was off to get his legs healed up before the party. He then went back to finish decorating so the early arrivals would be surprised. This time got used the nail gun right and stuck the banner up. He then picked up the stramers and ran them all over the room. He then ran them up the stairs. He then started to blow up the balloons. That took him a lot longer then usual. He was happy that his leg wounds weren't to deep. After blowing up 200 balloons he was done. He then shunpoed off to the med bay.
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Yoshirou Akiyama
Gotei 13 General/1st Division Captain
Yoshirou Akiyama


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Join date : 2009-08-07
Age : 31
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PostSubject: Re: Steves char wip   Steves char wip EmptyWed Feb 24, 2010 1:04 am

Denied.

I'm sorry but this does not show the skill required to be a visored. The sections are barely filled out, Your history is shorter than a midget (It doesn't even talk about his time in the Gotei thirteen, His life, anything. Just about this test.), And the Rp sample is lacking. It seems you tried to make it long, but your supposed to do quality over quantity, my friend.

Not be to mean or anything, but this is just why you're denied. I'd advise to go try and make an unseated shinigami app or something similar.
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Steve




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Join date : 2010-02-06

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PostSubject: Re: Steves char wip   Steves char wip EmptyWed Feb 24, 2010 10:29 am

eh whatever and you know that its says wip in my app title right?
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Reikon Hanpa

Reikon Hanpa


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Join date : 2009-08-05

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PostSubject: Re: Steves char wip   Steves char wip EmptyThu Feb 25, 2010 4:17 am

Doesn't matter if you're done or not. He can tell from what's here already
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