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Exodus
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Exodus


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PostSubject: Exodus's zanpaktou   Exodus's zanpaktou EmptyTue Aug 18, 2009 9:32 am

ooc i hope you don't consider the bankai god moding, I won't complain if you tell me to change it


Name: Vera

Manifestation: white cobra

Release Phrase:"Show your fangs, Vera."

Level:Shikai and Bankai obtained

Family:Poison

Sealed Zanpacktou:a small black dagger

[shikai]Released Zanpacktou:The dagger forms a black glove with a gold seal on the plam side of the glove.A small hole is on visible on the wrist of the glove that is the entrance to a concealed hollow metal spike.

Shikai Ability:Exodus's Shikai is a very simple to understand. When the gold seal comes in contact with any solid surface the hollow metal needle will shoot out of its concealed position about 4 inch's from the wrist.It injects a poison that causes massive amounts of pain.without doing any real damage to the enemy.After several strikes the pain becomes unbearable.


Bankai zanpacktou:A green orb about the size of a basketball.

Bankai Ability:The ball can stretch out into any shape (these described in the techniques). The surface of the "orb" is very sharp with even the slightest touch resulting in a cut of some kind. If someone is cut by the "orb" they will suffer from an effect similar to that of "meth bugs" (i.e you believe bugs are crawling beneath your skin and it will itch but even if scratch the feeling will never go away as it is completely mental.) in the affected area.Before changing shapes, the orb must fully form the orb again.

Techniques:(all in Bankai)

Name:Bara bara
effect:The orb separates into tiny barbs that fly toward the target to cause minimum damage but easily causes bankai effect.
duration:one strike

Name: Zetsu
Effect: The orb becomes two long swords and is always Exodus's first technique.
Duration: Can last as long as bankai is enabled.

Name: Cora
Effect: The orb becomes a net that is 5 X 5 feet. Used to wrap around either the traget, targets weapon, or any thrown object, mainly used as a "shield" from attacks.
Duration: maximum of 5 minutes (two posts)


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Kenta Talia
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PostSubject: Re: Exodus's zanpaktou   Exodus's zanpaktou EmptyThu Aug 20, 2009 9:05 pm

you need a cool down for your shikai ability.

And look at other peoples Zan your technique examples.
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Exodus
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PostSubject: Re: Exodus's zanpaktou   Exodus's zanpaktou EmptyFri Aug 21, 2009 6:16 am

wow i thought you would cut down the bankai, lol alright.I will change it here in a moment

EDIT: done updating, hope thats better
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PostSubject: Re: Exodus's zanpaktou   Exodus's zanpaktou EmptyFri Aug 21, 2009 9:00 am

I over looked a couple things on your Bankai, please tone it down some.
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PostSubject: Re: Exodus's zanpaktou   Exodus's zanpaktou EmptyFri Aug 21, 2009 7:09 pm

understandable
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PostSubject: Re: Exodus's zanpaktou   Exodus's zanpaktou EmptyMon Aug 24, 2009 12:52 am

I updated the Bankai, sorry that took so long
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PostSubject: Re: Exodus's zanpaktou   Exodus's zanpaktou EmptyMon Aug 24, 2009 12:59 am

approved.
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