Okay, several points to bring up.
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- In ressurection Jin's special ability is "Virulento" which is spanish for toxin.Jin extends a acidic based miasma venom material out of his body that enters the body of the target slowly destroying there insides then killing them.(If the poison enters it takes 10 post to kill them)
Even if it's ultimate ability or not, for every poison, there is a cure. My point is not to make some poison that 'INEVITABLY' kills off a person JUST like that in ten posts. Way you posted it shows that there is NO way out. And due to the way you made it and the way it seems to be based off of, it's a parasitic entity. Nonetheless, edit this and make it more favorable to the person with no insta-inevitable-death kind of deal.
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- Name:Araña Cero(Spider Cero)
Effect:A lime bright green cero fired out in a wide range in the shape of a large spider.This is an exclusive cero only available to Jin himself.
ALL Cero go to the Cero creation section. Edit this ability out, exclusive and 'special' Cero aren't techniques.
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- Name:Spider Requiem Bow
Effect:Charging his spiritual pressure to the max Jin can fire countless amounts of arrows from his golden bow and release them in multiple areas in a large explosion of reiatsu.
Okay, I don't know where you even got the bow in the first place, but in your released, sealed and initial releases don't even show a picture hinting your character is a bow wielder or even a written description of you making a bow. EDIT that out and fix that. Plus don't be so vague about the whole technique. Also, no pulling off Quincy bow-rip off here at all, your abilities are 'poisonous', not 'energetic'.
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- Name:Veneno Caida
Effect:Jin is able release a pressurized torrent of poison surging at his enemy.The torrent is large enough to cover a whole block of the field.
Cooldown:3 post
Okay, what field exactly? From what measurements are we going with? Be more specific.
All in all, I say you shouldn't make your entire abilities SO vague that it makes the moderator's job hard to deter just what you do, as it opens up the window for a potential of godmodding and OP'd abilities. Edit your entire sheet and put in MORE details.
You are hereby
DENIED until further notice.
