ichisake's application (making rp sample not complete repeat..NOT COMPLETE)

Name: (Character name)
ichisake

Nick name/alias: (optional)
ichi

Age: (Current age of your character)
152

Visual Age: (How old your character looks like)
14

Gender: (Male or female.)
female

Division: (Choose from 1-13 or Kidou Corps)
kidou corps

Personality: (Everyone has a general personality, post your character’s in a paragraph form)
she is very eager to learn in the arts of battle. tomb-boy, she liked to play with her four brothers. she like to do all that crap guys does. she loves to paint colors of the seasons even colors of the sunrise and nighttime. When pissed shes a hothead and starts attacking without a second thought sometimes when this happens out of pure chance she wins her battles (but the other times...well...lets just say that she has some pretty nasty scars on her arms to prove it) but when focased she can be pretty good fighter. but,She never lets her accomplishments get to her head,(cause proffesionals might wanna kick her ass for bragging.) her favorite thing to do is to destroy hallows and to fight and learn from others like combat skills. she will happily help any good shinagami that needs help exept for evil Arrancar the only help they get from her will be to put them out of there misery or die trying.(cause she doen't give a shit to those evil bastards) she hates it when her friends, and her little brother Kingi is harmed. (kingi is the little quincy that clings to her back.)

Appearance: (What your character looks like. An image will do also.)
just like the avatar and is sometimes seen with her little quincy brother, Kingi clinging to her back. she also has black/blue colored hair, and electric blue eyes.

History/Background: (Be as thorough as possible, because this will be looked at
closely. You can write about their life on earth, then their history as a shinigami, if you need a promptshe was born in a rather poor family. when she was born here brothers took care of her and her parents who were apparently high on narcotics. she grew up playing with her friends and brothers, apparently they were all boys. then the boys moved on to jobs and running buisnesses. she had only one person to play with at age 13. until that very fateful day. when they were rough housing when she got pushed into the streets and got hit by a 18 wheeler.

pain, thats all she could feel. her soul was pulled out of her body. and many months later a shinigami named shinikabi passed her on to soul soceity. she eventually found shinikabi and begged him to train her in the arts of the shinigami and the way of the demon she is distant to other shinagami exept Shin and Kiniko (and of course her quincy brother Kingi). she saved her from a hallow after that they became great friends and is also very difensive of her. She wants to help pluses get to soul society and to fight against evil and to learn from wiser and more powerful shinagami so one day she too will become wise as well.


RP sample:

You need to add an appearance and extent the personality.

sorry my computer is laggin

are you Shinikabi izinaru?

no i am not shin, i'm a friend of his...he just helped me set it up.

your age has be at least 100.

all right i added and i changed a few things
sorry it took so long

Can you space everything out its very hard to read your app, also you must be at lest 100 yrs to be a shinigami edit that and all.

ok i changed my age

and i spaced everything out

oh and by the way...my friend, Kiniko is new and she is now working on her app so say hi!!!

>w< hi

approved.

congradulations

thanks

but you got a long way t'go