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 Hiruma's Segunda Etapa

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The Hirumian
Odio
The Hirumian


Posts : 109
Join date : 2009-08-06
Age : 29
Location : Finland

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PostSubject: Hiruma's Segunda Etapa   Hiruma's Segunda Etapa EmptyTue Oct 20, 2009 8:42 pm

Name: Ruler of the Skies

Release Phrase: Golpee de arriba, el Gobernante de los Cielos [Strike from above , ruler of the skies .]

Appearance:

He gains a second claw , changing his appearance more wild . His hair grows longer and his teeth get sharper . His clothing changes , leaving only the bottom clothed . His upperbody is nude . His wings get slightly bigger and he is able to fly better than before . His eyes turn blood red .

Ability:

His strenght and speed increase alot . Like 10fold what he was before . Secondly he gains the ability to fly . Also he can vomit/spit other bats that fly towards his enemy and bite them . Giving Hiruma the ability to trace them . Then he can create ultra waves that can destroy incoming weak Kidou attacks .

((Training for Segunda Etapa has the same rules as Bankai Training))


Last edited by Hiruma on Wed Oct 21, 2009 2:10 am; edited 1 time in total
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Join date : 2009-10-02

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PostSubject: Re: Hiruma's Segunda Etapa   Hiruma's Segunda Etapa EmptyWed Oct 21, 2009 2:07 am

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Ability: His strenght and speed increase alot . Like 10fold what he was before . Secondly he gains the ability to fly . Also he can vomit/spit other bats that fly towards his enemy and bite them . Giving Hiruma the ability to trace them . Then he can create ultra waves that can break illusions.

Everything is fine with the Segunda Etapa, but I mostly concentrate on the abilities. What concerns me is an anti-element attack which negates illusions. It'd make another's tech entirely useless with the express purpose on getting rid of it, thus making you immune to their attacks and giving them no chance but to resort to their weapons at hand and not their techniques. For now it's PENDING. Remedy this problem and my verdict would be more favorable.
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The Hirumian
Odio
The Hirumian


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PostSubject: Re: Hiruma's Segunda Etapa   Hiruma's Segunda Etapa EmptyWed Oct 21, 2009 2:12 am

Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Hiruma's Segunda Etapa   Hiruma's Segunda Etapa EmptyWed Oct 21, 2009 2:15 am

Right-o, in the power vested in me, blah blah blah, APPROVED.
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The Hirumian
Odio
The Hirumian


Posts : 109
Join date : 2009-08-06
Age : 29
Location : Finland

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PostSubject: Re: Hiruma's Segunda Etapa   Hiruma's Segunda Etapa EmptyTue Oct 27, 2009 1:11 pm

May I add some abilities ?
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Aristotle Basileios

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PostSubject: Re: Hiruma's Segunda Etapa   Hiruma's Segunda Etapa EmptyTue Oct 27, 2009 10:07 pm

Put the new version in a new post. No editing the previous one.
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The Hirumian
Odio
The Hirumian


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PostSubject: Re: Hiruma's Segunda Etapa   Hiruma's Segunda Etapa EmptyTue Oct 27, 2009 10:30 pm

Name: Ruler of the Skies

Release Phrase: Golpee de arriba, el Gobernante de los Cielos [Strike from above , ruler of the skies .]

Appearance:

He gains a second claw , changing his appearance more wild . His hair grows longer and his teeth get sharper . His clothing changes , leaving only the bottom clothed . His upperbody is nude . His wings get slightly bigger and he is able to fly better than before . His eyes turn blood red .

Ability:

His strenght and speed increase alot . Like 10fold what he was before . Secondly he gains the ability to fly . Also he can vomit/spit other bats that fly towards his enemy and bite them . Giving Hiruma the ability to trace them . Then he can create ultra waves that can destroy incoming weak Kidou attacks . He can also attack with the waves . It turns into one enormous blade or a few smaller ones . The attack is made of pure reiatsu thet is released from his mouth and it's transparent . So the attack will be very hard to see . Ofcourse any Captain could sense it . He also gains a radar , he can sense people around him . The radar prevents everyone from sneaking up on him . His hearing gets enhanced too since he is a bat .
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