Shinikabi is back! [editing]

General Information:

-Full Name: Shinikabi Izinaru

-Nicknames/Aliases/Titles: Shini/Shin

-Noteable Family: ?

-Loyalties: Captain commander

-Actual Age 245

Appearance:

-Appearance:

Spoiler:

-Preferred Wardrobe: The usual shinigami uniform

-Height: 6"0

-Weight: 148 lbs

-Physical Age: 16

Race Specific Information:

-Squad: 13th

-Seat: captain

Character/Player Bio:

-Personality: A very strong and aggressive personality, however short tempered. He is very easy to be angered and is rather hot headed. He doesn't appear angry though. He usual seems to be very happy. Not too happy though. Rather cheerful, Shinikabi has a habit of arguing. He does not always agree with the C.C.. but he follows orders anyways. He does not fear challenging someone in a conversation and has a rather large, social, personality. He does not, however, enjoy fighting on the offensive. He'd rather be on the defensive.

Shin is a very caring, and feeling person, he can show affection, and believes that if you know how to care for one, you can always look back and find a small measure of peace. That is the thinking of Shinikabi. Peace is a priority. And it always will be in his head.

He sometimes likes to spend time in his small orchard of cherry blossoms in the outskirts of the seretei. Though some captains to not think highly of this. It is a place to think for him.

-Rank: Eilte

-History:

Shinikabi was born in the Karakura town long ago, and was the only person in his family to encounter the paranormal beings of plus souls, hollows, and the legendary soul reapers. He had a friend that was a quincy, whoi was much older than him. The man had dark brown hair, green eyes,and a very lean body build.
The quincy kicked the quincy abilities into shinikabi at a young age after abducting him from his own family. It didn't matter though. When he was taken shinikabi could barely open his eyes without crying. And in the many years of training, the harsh training to be exact, there was a slight incident with a hollow where Shinikabi was knocked out cold. And could hardly remember the events.

His friends told him the hollow had nearly devoured him before they had got there. Shinikabi was baffled by this. But soon shook it off in the hospital in which the quincy resided. One night though. Something would completely change the sights of shinikabi.

A group of arrancar calle the Los Treyes Reyes came to the hospital, and made a deal with the leader. Many of the quincy, especially Shinikabi himself. Was rather angered with this. And at the age of sixteen, Shinikabi comitted suicide in front of everyone, saying that it was natural for this to be.

Shinikabi's soul was ripped out, and soon enough, evolved into a hollow before a soul reaper could send him to the other side. However, He managed to kill quite a few soul reapers. As he appeared to be a drakon.

Sooner or later, Shinikabi was soon purified by a soul reaper. And was sent to the soul society. And after a good time, Shinikabi entered the academy of soul reapers at age thirty four.

Soon enough, he graduated out of the academy, free at last, or, so he thought. He was dubbed lieutenant of the 13th division.

Many missions came at that time, after he became lieutenant. Lots of the other soul reapers were not all so kind to him, and treated him with disrespect. It angered Shinikabi, a lot. But his captain would always put him off of his anger and brighten his day.

-Roleplay Samples:

Shinikabi woke that morning to the sound of his young lieutenant who said that they had to work. Shinikabi rolled over, groaning in displeasure of getting out of bed. Then his lieutenant simply flipped the matress. Shinikabi fell off and got up, rustling his hair a bit and rubbing his forehead. He popped his neck joints and got up. "Who told you that you could do that?" he said patting the lieutenant on the head. She was a head and a half shorter than her, and she squinted as his hands pressed down on her.
Shinikabi wasn't necessarily mad at his lieutenant. But he wasn't happy with her either.
He lazily walked over, slipped on his captains jacket. The twelfth japanese character of numbers was finely embroidered on the back. The jacket was heavy, like a couple pounds of fabric. but it fit neatly on his broad shoulders. And he walked out of the room, his steaming lieutenant following close behind.

As he walked down the hall, he stopped suddenly, and solidly. His lietenant accidentally bumped into him, which kinda angered Shin for her clumsieness. Oh well.
Something was clouding his mind, and he didn't know what. He needed time to think.
He walked to the window, slightly leaped and perched in the sill, "Follow me." and he jumped. Hundreds of feet down into the depths of the seretei. Falling straight down.

Focussing his spirit pressure around his feet, he landed,making a small crater in the ground. A small crowd of folks cleared. All but two individuals. "Here already?" he said to the two arrancar.

Right off the bat, written appearance and preferred wardrobe

12th squad is taken

Also, age 134 and being a Captain? Being a non-loyal shinigami thats a CAPTAIN of all things? How does that make sense? lol. First, your too young to be a captain...thats VERY young, even as a seated officer. also, how do you expect to be a non-loyal Captain?